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Victor Ratzlaff vratzlaff@gmail.com 173.183.167.169

I liked the way Aaron wrote the story like an 8-year-old would think. I also liked the comic-strip style artwork. Children need pictures to augment their reading experience. A great touch was the rendering of childhood sadness at the loss of something familiar i.e. the fencerow. Combining this loss with the fall season was powerful.

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